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名:《今日的他当年的我》或《今日当年》
发布时间:2013/7/9  阅读次数:551  字体大小: 【】 【】【
剧名:《今日的他当年的我》或《今日当年》
主要人物:嫣(女一)大四学生,家境不好,但很独立,为了不给家庭增加负担,经常打工。
                岩(男一)大四学生,家庭一般,有骨气,有理想
                飞:事业有成有家室的人,开宝马或保时捷
                欣:事业有成的单身女人
                嫣的家人:经常要嫣嫁个有钱人
               红:堕落的大学女生,嫣的好朋友
龙套人物:嫣的舍友,岩的舍友,红的男友。
故事概梗:嫣与岩是一对大学恋人,说好一生一世一心一意,可毕业之后,面对社会的现实,他们的感情渐渐地出现了变化。飞是嫣的老板,是一个有家室的人,可他对自己曾经追求过的人,也是因为大学之后分开。而嫣的出现,正好弥补了他的遗憾。因为她长得真的很像他以前的女友。而岩因为毕业之后,面对事业的低谷,还坚守着曾经的那份诺言,一直努力着。可女友等不及他事业有成,已离开了他。欣是一个事业有成的女强人,但亦有一段感情的问题困扰着她。以前跟她说好一生一世的男友,已成人夫。
创作思想:说好的一生一世,世间真有几个能与自己最初最爱的人厮守。那些以前说着永不分离的人,早已经散落在天涯了。爱情在兜兜转转里,错过。


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内景    岩的房里    日景
         一堆工具在桌子上,他坐在前面,细心地用各种工具在做一个戒指。

主要表现
         专注的眼神,额头汗珠不时地渗出来。

一系列不同的角度
         用剪,钳,镊子,在做一个别出心裁的戒指。

插入镜头
         四根铜线,变成一个简单而又别具一格的戒指。

内景    岩的房里    日景
         一堆工具在桌子上,他坐在前面,细心地用各种工具在做一个戒指。

主要表现
         专注的眼神,额头汗珠不时地渗出来。

一系列不同的角度
         用剪,钳,镊子,在做一个别出心裁的戒指。

插入镜头
         四根铜线,变成一个简单而又别具一格的戒指。
内景    嫣的宿舍    日景
         嫣在镜前梳妆,红在洗头,舍友有的在床上躺着,有的在玩电脑。
                                                  舍友
                                             嫣,又去约会了?
                                                  另一舍友
                                             为谁画眉为谁抹,为君赏识把脸画。
镜前耕耘镜里忙,但愿成君梦中人。
一看她用某某牌子的防晒霜就知道是去幽会情人啦。
         嫣
去你的!
      舍友
你说,化妆,到底是为了把丑给遮住,还是为了把美给展示呢?
         红
年轻时的化妆啊,叫爱美;老了才化妆,那叫怕丑。
(停顿了一下)
你说,要是有一天,我突然不用化妆了,是我自信了,还是我自暴自弃了?
          舍友
青春才是最美的化妆品,爱情是最好的化妆师。
你不化妆,说明你滋润着呗,要不然,就是失恋自暴自弃了。
          另一舍友
化妆会腐蚀一个人的灵魂。化妆是无罪,但化妆是会上瘾的。怎么就没人禁止呢?
          红
现在谁不为自己打扮一下,生活是一种学问,化妆是一生活。
           舍友
这世界上啊,有一种职业叫入殓师,专门给死人化妆,人都死了,还化妆,何况活人呢?
           嫣
我觉得啊,女人的一生就像一场足球比赛,镜子是裁判,化妆品,只不过是场边的球迷,无论你怎么喊,比分就在那里。

               舍友
那你说你化妆,是为了镜中的你,还是为了镜外的你呢?          
                嫣
镜里的我是我眼中的我。镜外的我是别人眼中的我。
                   红
女为悦已者容,当然是为了镜外的啦。要是为了你自己,又不见你晚上睡觉前化妆。    
                   另一舍友
化妆是毒药,不化妆就是解药。是药三分毒,自己酌情用药吧。
                    红
爱美之心啊,人皆有之。化妆是无罪的,不用一化妆,你就有罪恶感才行。不化妆见客户,是对客户的不尊重。知道不?
                    舍友
                                        如果对方爱你的话,你的鱼尾纹都是一种美。如果对方不是真爱你的话,就算你化得跟天仙一样,也是枉然。徒添讨厌。
                                                             (停顿一下)
化妆,可以让一个变美,也可以让一个变丑。
                        另一舍友
男人对女人的爱,你从镜子是读不出来的。
                                            世上没有比快乐更能使人美丽的化妆品。
角度对准嫣
                嫣拿着那防晒霜。
                                                                 嫣
                                            听你们这么一说,我到底是化,还是不化好呢?
                                                                 红
                                            当然是化啦,你男友的单车又没有顶蓬,不能遮风挡雨的。
                                   
外景    某十字大街    夜景
运动镜头    一辆单车驶入画面。拉回,嫣坐在岩的单车后面。路灯亮着昏昏的灯光。他们沿着路,慢慢地骑着。
                                                  欣
                          岩,骑了一天,累了吧?
                                                   岩
                             有你在我的副驾驶座上,我就觉得有走不路想带你走。          
                                                  (停顿一下)
                             嫣,帮我从我右口袋子里拿点东西出来

                                                  嫣
                             什么来的?



嫣的视点     
                一个精致的礼品盒,轻轻打开。

特写镜头
              一个简陋而别具一格的戒指。

                                                  岩
                             送给你的。                                                  
                                                  
                                                   嫣
                              什么意思?

                                                   岩
                              一心一意一生一世。
                                                   嫣
                               戒指,意味着什么,你应该知道吧?
                                                   岩
                               当然,现在我还没有什么事业,不过,我会奋斗的,你会等我吗?
                                                   嫣
                               等多久?
                                                   岩
                               201314,记得这是我们之间的约定喔。那天就是我迎娶你的日子。
                                                   嫣
                               嗯,指尖环绕,你我的誓言。
                                                   岩
                                                 (大声喊)
                               嫣,我爱你!    
主要表现•嫣
              嫣紧紧地抱着岩。幸福地闭着眼。
                                             
另一角度
              岩顶着风吹,使劲地踩着单车。
                                                             岩
                                                      风很大,冷吗?
                                                             嫣
                                                      不冷。
                                                      (停顿了一下)
                                       世界最保暖的,是你的体温。
                                                             岩
                                                       (侧过头来)
                                        你说什么,我听不到,风很大,大点声。    
                                                             嫣
                                                        (大声喊)
                                        我说,我不冷
更宽的角度
              两人渐渐消失在黑夜大街的尽头。    
                              
    内景    岩的房里 日景
              一阵刺耳的闹钟铃音,把熟睡在床的岩从床上弹起。开始紧张地刷牙,洗脸,匆匆忙忙地吃过早餐,穿上西装,在镜前,自信地笑了笑,带上一个公文包,出了门。

一系列快切
           在各个公司之间奔走面试。
新角度
           经理欣严肃地坐在办公椅上,对着来面试的岩。
                                                             欣                        
金钱和工作,哪个对你更重要?
                   岩
金钱很重要,但工作才是最重要的。
                    欣    
                                         你希望老板有什么样的物质?
                                                             岩
                                        知识渊博,有幽默感,对下属的忠诚,高要求。
                                                             欣
如果你被录用,你希望工作多久。
                     岩
                                       我希望是一段很长的时间。
                                                             欣
                                        下面我问最后一个问题,想好了再回答。     

                                                            
                                        爱一个人,对方也爱你,甜的居多;爱一个人,对方不知道,酸的居多;爱一个人,对方不爱你,苦的居多。你觉得,我现在是什么味道?
                                                             岩
                                                   (迷惑地)
                                         何以面试不是了解我的基本情况,问这个。。。
                                                             欣
                                            你若不了解你的上级,你进来,你也做不久,你不是来应聘经理助理的吗?我也想通过这个问题,看看你的观察力。我们这是做广告的公司,有很多应酬,需要这样的人。之前已经有十几个回答得不甚人意。你认真思考再回答我。

岩的角度
           岩细细地打量了一下欣。三十岁左右,右手没有戴戒指。双眼有几分血丝。
                                                             岩
                                            柚子味。
                                                                欣
                                                            (幽幽地)
                                            柚子味,先苦后甜。可甜什么时候才能来。
                                                             (停顿一下)     
                                            挺聪明的回答。好了,过两三天,有人会通知你的了。
                                                                岩
                                            谢谢!


    内景    某某酒店包厢 夜景
              灯红酒绿,人们在唱着生日歌。
主要表现红
           红对着一个豪华的蛋糕许愿,吹蜡烛。突然,他的男友送上单膝跪地,打开捧着的一个盒子。红幸福地望着她男友。全场的人都起哄着。她男友温柔地帮她戴上那戒指。
                                              某人
                                        (羡慕地)
                                  好大,好大好闪的钻戒啊
角度对准嫣
              嫣失落地转过身去。
内景    酒店包厢外 夜景
              嫣在接电话。
                                                 嫣
                                    (不耐烦地)
                                  我哪来的钱啊,我那点兼职的钱,差不多都寄回去给你们了。
                                       (停顿了一下)
                                  大学没问过你们要一分钱,还要往家里寄钱。全班也只有我那么幸福。
                                  现在毕业还没找到工作呢,等找到了,领了工资再寄给你,好了,好
                                  了,我明天就去找工作。
内景    某某公司办公室 日景
           办公室装修得很豪华,很宽敞。嫣推开门进去。
角度对准嫣
           嫣长长的头发,化了淡淡的妆,穿着职业装走进去。清新的形象,深深地打动了坐
          在办公椅上的经理飞。
更宽的角度
           他们欢快地进行了简介介绍。经理迫不及待地拿来入职合同给嫣。嫣也简略地看了看就签字了。
一系列镜头
经理飞经常找嫣到办公室谈话,嘘寒问暖的。下班,有没有时间一起吃个饭,周末要不要一起去某某地游玩,用不用开车送她回家之类的,嫣每每都疲于用各种借口来婉拒。同事们个个都侧目,议论纷纷。
外景    大街路上    夜景
              嫣一个人走在大街上,望着路上成双成对的情侣,忍不住,拿起电话,打给了岩。
                                             岩
                                   喂,是嫣吗?
                                             嫣
                                   嗯
                                             岩
                                    怎么了,想我了?
                                             嫣
                                    嗯,你在哪里?怎么你那边那么吵的?
                                             岩
                                    和几个哥们喝一下酒,聊一下合作生意的事情。
                                             嫣
                                       那么晚了,还聊什么生意?不许骗我,说,你现在在哪里?
                                             岩
                                    都说了是跟朋友一起喝酒谈生意。你怎么就不信我呢?
                                             嫣
                                    我不管。快说。。。 你就欺负我回了家乡,管不着你了,是吗?
                                             岩
                                   你怎么那么不讲理呢
                                              嫣
                                   我怎么了,我怎么不讲理了?
                                              岩
                                   好了,有空再跟你说吧,先这样了,我先挂了。
                嫣
                                   你敢,你敢挂试试
                                              手机中传出
(嘟嘟嘟)
另一角度
                欢,眼角,渗出眼泪来。傻傻地站着,一动不动地望着路灯。
内景     银行    日景
                   岩拿着三万块现金到银行里汇给朋友提供的账户上。     
主要表现岩
                岩拿着电话,匆匆地拨了他朋友的电话,发现是个空号。岩一下子变傻了,然后是愤怒,双手抱着头,狠抓头发,蹲了下来。
外景     某酒吧前    夜景
                   岩失意地走在大街上,想找个酒吧去喝个够。
岩的角度
                   他看到经理欣一个人,喝得东倒西歪地从酒吧里走了出来。
欣的视点
                她用半眯半睁的眼,打量了一下马路,依稀看见一台红色的车,就走了过去。



内景    欣的屋里    日景
           阳光从窗外照入,正好照到欣的床上

欣的角度
      看见岩卷曲地睡在地板上,
岩的角度
      他睁开眼睛,发现欣一动不动地盯着自己,慌忙地爬起来。
                                                   岩
                                                 (紧张地)
                               早,昨晚你喝醉了,我刚好路过,见你喝醉了,不忍心你醉驾出事。
                               就叫了的士,扶了你回来。可我想走的时候,发现钱不够
                               回去了,就在这睡了一晚,你。。。你不会介意吧?
                                                   欣
                               很介意,介意你干嘛睡在地板上,不是有沙发吗?
                                                   岩
                               你昨晚吐得利害,正好吐在沙发上。我清洗干净,但还是湿漉漉的,
                               怎么睡?

闪回    酒吧外    夜景
         欣准备开车,岩走了过来。欣神志不清地胡言乱语。
                                                  欣
                                             (自言自语)
                                  什么一生一世,都要是骗人的。骗人的。。。
                                                   岩
                                  喝得那么醉了,你还怎么开车?
                                                   欣
                                   不用你管。不用。。。
欣的角度
                欣极力地推开岩。
岩的角度
                岩不管她怎么打骂,抱着欣就去打的。
内景    欣的室里    夜景
                岩扶着欣进去,欣在大厅里吐了起来,刚好吐在沙发上。岩抱欣回她房,用毛巾帮她洗了洗脸。
新角度
                   岩发觉欣眼角带泪,口中还念念有词。
                                                                欣
                                   那一夜,我确定你没有喊我,你为什么不喊我?
                                   为什么不喊我,叫我留下。
                                                      (停顿一下)     
                                   再远,我都听得见。
岩的视点
岩看到床旁边的桌子上有一张被撕开一半的相片,相片里只剩下幸福地笑着的欣。岩看了看桌下的垃圾框,一张被揉得皱巴巴的请帖,是一张结婚请帖。
特写
                请帖上的日期:二零一一年三月十四日

                                                       岩
                                                  (对着躺着的欣)
                                       裹一裹被子,把眼泪藏在里面或许会好一点。     


回到此刻    欣的角度
          欣满脸疑惑地望着岩。
                                                  欣
                                   我昨晚有没有胡言乱语来着。
                                                  岩
                                   没有。。。你信吗?
过肩镜头
           两人相对无言地站着。
                             
                                                   欣
                                             (不好意思地)
                                   饿了吧你?不如一起去吃个早餐
    岩的角度
           岩看了看窗外,阳光灿烂。
                                                      岩
                                    你确定是吃早餐,而不是。。。。午餐?
                                                      欣
                                    谁说早餐一定是早上吃的,你洗刷一下,我去把车开回来先。
欣的角度
           欣拿着毛巾和牙刷放到岩手里。
                                                       欣
这是没人用过的毛巾和牙刷。
外景     海边的岸堤上    傍晚
           绿草青青,晚霞片片。


靠近汽车的左侧    运动镜头
           欣开着那红色的敞篷车,副驾上坐着岩。在沙滩的旁边停了下来
                                                        欣
                                        我以前傍晚经常来这来看海。
                                                        岩
                                        那你一定很喜欢张雨生的《大海》。
                                                        欣
                                                   (很吃惊地)
                                        你怎么知道的?
                                                        岩
                                         猜的。
                                                       (停顿了一下)
                                            一个人喜欢一首歌,首先这首歌一定是跟她有一样的故事。
                                             打动了她心底最柔软的地方。
                                                             欣
                                             嗯,那你最喜欢哪首歌?
                                                             岩
                                             莫文蔚的《盛夏的果实》。
欣的角度
                欣望着岩,笑笑地,然后转过头去,看着海的尽头。
                                                                岩
                                             听说午后的海风会唱歌,暖洋洋的,很惬意。
                                                                欣
                                             我皮肤不好,很容易晒黑,所以我都是傍晚才过来。
                                                        (停顿一下)
                                             一白遮百丑,黑了就更没人要了。               
                                                                岩
                                            怎么会呢。
新角度
               欣在海边,用双手捧起海水,放在手心。
                                                                 欣
                                             看看自己被光阴困住的影子。
                                                                 岩
                                             放回大海,你就自由了。    
更宽的角度
                欣与岩坐在沙滩上。面对着大海。
               (背景音乐《大海》响起)
内景    某高级餐厅    日景
               豪华而安静的西式环境里,依稀地坐着几个人。飞体贴地帮嫣拉开凳子,飞点了红酒,还有一些嫣喜欢吃的食物。
嫣的角度
              嫣的电话响了起来,嫣看了一下来显示,脸上立刻从快乐的氛围变成忧虑。
                                                                 嫣
                                             不好意思,接过电话。
新的角度
               嫣拿起电话,离开了饭桌。     
另一角度
               当嫣回来时,飞察觉嫣的脸色更难看了,忧虑也重了几分。
嫣的角度
               嫣大口大口地喝着酒,一言不语。可眼里刹那间眼泪就流了出来。
                                                                 飞
                                              出什么事了?
                                                                 嫣
                                              没什么。。。
过肩镜头
                   飞递上了纸巾。嫣拿起纸巾擦去了眼角的眼泪。
                                                                     飞
                                                                (轻声地)
                                                  说出来,或许我能帮上忙呢?
                                                                     嫣
                                                  我
                                                                (停顿了一下)
                                                   我爸他。。。(又抽泣了起来)
                                                                     飞
                                                   伯父他怎么了
                                                                     嫣
                                                   他病了。
                                                                     飞
                                                   严不严重?
飞的视点
              飞看着嫣的脸,更仿似看到了他初恋的影子,依然那么深刻。
              
                                                                
新角度
              飞拿出随身的一张支票,写了五万。
                                                                  (继续)
                                                   拿去给伯父看病吧。
                                                                      嫣
                                                   这怎么行呢?
                                                                       飞
                                                   有什么不行的,你要是觉得不好意思,就当是预支工资嘛,这总行了吧?
嫣的角度
                嫣惶恐而激动地拿起支票。
                                                                      飞
                                                                 (感慨地)
                                                   如果你没有哭过,你的眼睛就不会那么迷人。
                                                   像极了我以前的一个同学。

                                                                       嫣
                                                                  (感动地)
                                                   谢谢了,老总!
                                                                       飞
                                                   别老总老总的叫,我没那么老,都给叫你老了好几十岁了,叫我阿飞吧。
                                                                       嫣
                                                                 (笑逐颜开地)
                                                      哪能叫得老的呢,老总!
    角度对准飞
                   飞使了一个眼色。
                                                                       嫣
                                                                  (不安地)
                                                       阿飞!
                                                                       飞
                                                       唉!这才对嘛,你看我,立刻青春了许多了吧。
                                                       老实说,你嫣然的微笑是我每日享受到的魅力
    更宽的角度
                   他们两人把酒言欢。
外景    商业街     日景
                   琳琅满目的商品,熙熙攘攘的人,红与嫣等几个好友一起逛街。
红的角度
                   红都挑着最贵的来买,看得同学们羡慕又妒忌。
                                                                       红
                                                       又不是我的钱,用不着心疼,都是男人的钱,不用白不用。说不准他明天又换了女人,你会后悔当初怎么不把他的钱,全花完了。
                                                                      某同学
                                                       男人有了钱就花心,女人有了钱就花钱。
新角度
                一辆豪车停在红和嫣们的跟前,红打开门,摇了摇手,跟同学们打个拜拜的手势。车瞬间就飞了开去。留下同学们羡慕的伫足远望。
另一角度
                岩踩着自行车过来接嫣。
一系列快切镜头
                在嫣与红之间交叉切换。红与她男友在高级餐厅,嫣与岩在一间小饭馆。

                   娇艳地坐在餐厅最显眼的地方。点着各式各样的最贵的菜。不忘了打个电话给嫣。
                                                                          红
                                                       嫣,我点了好多你喜欢的菜,要不要一起过来一起吃啊,就在临江的某某酒店,还点了红酒喔。
                                                                          嫣
                                                        不用了,我这也点了我喜欢的面条。
                                                                          红
                                                        这里的意大利面条,很地道。你那些街边的小面条,都不卫生,怎么入口呢?
                                                                          嫣
                                                        能饱肚子就行了,你可要小心你的男友在你的红酒里下迷药,贵的也不见得会干净。你慢慢吃吧。我这就不用你担心了。
                                                                           红
                                                        那你就慢慢享受你的小面条吧。不要说我不关照你喔          
新角度
                   岩坐在一边正津津有味地吃着面条。嫣却吃不下去了。
岩的角度
                   岩吃着吃着,见嫣不吃。
                                                                            岩     
                                                           怎么不吃了?不是逛了一天,饿了吗?
                                                                            嫣
                                                            饱了。
                                                                               岩
                                                            最近怎么变娇气了那么,你拽了,要我喂你吧?
另一角度
                   岩捧起嫣面前的碗,正想喂嫣。
                                                                               嫣
                                                            都说饱了,你没听见吗?
更宽的角度
                   嫣拿起包包,头也不回,就走了出去。
内景    嫣的办公室    日景
                嫣坐在办公桌前,愁眉苦脸地盯着窗外。
插入镜头
                嫣的电话响了起来。是家里来的电话。嫣拿起电话到厕所里。
                                                                                家里(画外音)
                                                             你爸病得越来越利害,医生说要动大手术,说要。。。
                                                                                嫣
                                                                我不是往家里寄了五万了吗?还不够。
                                                                                家里
                                                                医生说要二十五万。
                                                                                嫣
                                                                我哪来那么多钱啊?我这年的工资都提前预
                                                           支了。
嫣的角度
                    嫣蹲在厕所里哭了起来。
新角度
有同事进厕所来,嫣慌忙地擦了擦眼泪,走了出去。
飞的角度
                    一切,飞看在眼里,飞找出嫣的档案,找到她家的地址,电话。
内景     嫣的宿舍    夜景
                     嫣躺在床上,一声不声地盯着天花板上的灯光。
特写镜头
                    嫣的手机响了起来。屏幕上显示,家!
                                                                                 嫣
                                                                  妈,我正在想办法呢?
                                                                                嫣的妈
                                                                 嫣啊,你老板打了三十万过来了,你爸手术很成功,记得多谢你老板,他是我们家的大恩人。
                                                                                 嫣
                                                                           (愕然地)
                                                                 喔!
特写镜头
                   嫣,笑了笑,双眼却瞪着。笑容慢慢又变成了忧虑。
新的角度
                红回了来,洗了个澡就上床睡去了。其他的舍友还没回来。

一系列快切
      主要表现嫣
      反拍红     
                                                                  红
                                                                嫣!你睡了吗?
                                                                  嫣
                                                                还没有。
                                                                     红
                                                                大家是不是很讨厌我?
                                                                  嫣
                                                                怎么会呢?都住在一起快四年了。
                                                                     红
                                                                 那大家为什么不跟我一起晒面巾了呢?
                                                                     嫣
                                                                 你那面巾那么珍贵,万一她们拿错了,岂不遭你一顿臭骂?
                                                                     红
                                                                  怎么会呢?
                                                                 (停顿一下)
                                                                     对了,听说你的老板对你很不错。
                                                                     嫣
                                                                     嗯 !
                                                                     红
                                                                 爱情就像一只蝴蝶,它喜欢飞到哪里,就把欢乐带到哪里。怎么你还是愁眉不展的?
                                                                     嫣
                                                                  初恋是永生难忘的!第一次听到他对我说"我爱你",我的世界一瞬间鲜花绽开。
                                                                      红
                                                                  在这个世界上,女人最珍贵的财产就是一个男人的心。可惜,香烟遇上火柴,就注定受伤害。     
                                                                      嫣
                                                                 我曾经对他说过,无论你身在何处,无论你为何忙碌,我都会在此守候
                                                                       红
                                                                  (感慨地)
                                                                  承诺常常很像蝴蝶,美丽的飞舞,突然间就不见了。
                                                                       嫣
                                                                     我真怕,真真的怕我变了
                                                                       红
                                                                     你爱上你老板了吧?你要是觉得怕对不起岩,你可以把第一次给他。这样或许会心安理得一点。
                                                                       嫣
                                                                      我只是想有一个人明白我,即使我什么都没说。
外景    岩的宿舍外    夜景
              嫣在岩的宿舍门外徘徊。
插入镜头
              一辆红色敞篷轿车停在大门外。是欣与岩一起看完日落回来,欣吻了岩一下。
岩的角度
              岩受宠若惊,岩慌忙地下了车。     
新角度
           岩挥别了欣。正往宿舍走时,见到嫣正哭着脸看着自己。
另一角度
           嫣二话不说,掉头就走。岩追了上去。
                                                                          岩
                                                                     (焦急地)
                                                                     嫣,你听我解释。我加班得太晚了,老板不忍心我冒着那么冷的天骑着单车回来,就送了我回来。我说的是真的。
                                                                          嫣
                                                                      (边哭边喊)     
                                                                 我能说什么,说我妒忌她吗?如果我不爱你,我就不会思念你,我就不会妒忌你身边的异性,我也不会失去自信心和斗志,我更不会痛苦。如果我能够不爱你,那该多好。
                                                                           岩
                                                                  还记得,我们曾经说过什么吗?一心一意一生一世,我又怎么会爱上她呢?她只是我的老板而已
更宽的角度
          嫣在风中的离去的背景。
                                                                                    
内景    岩的宿舍    日景
               岩对着墙上挂着的日历,用笔在上面圈着圆圈。
特写镜头
              2013年1月3日。
                                                                                岩
                                                                          (对着舍友们)
                                                                  有哪位想去献血的?
                                                                                 舍友
                                                                     你啊,思念化进了血液里,夜晚涨痛了双眼。
                                                                     你看,双眼血丝都快长出芽了。快点去放少点血吧,我们,营养不良,还贫血着呢!
内景    大型商场    日景
              岩买了一枚精致的戒指,还给欣买了一盒防晒用品。
外景    沙滩     夜景
               岩把那防晒用品,送给欣。岩把那防晒霜送到欣的面前。
角度对准欣
               欣接过那防晒霜。细细地看着,用手轻抚着。
特写镜头
               欣在抚摸某某防晒霜。
                                                       欣
                                                  (感慨地)
                                  我缺的不是防晒霜,只是少了一个一起晒太阳的人。
                                                        岩
                                  防晒,防的其实并不是太阳,而是周围刺眼的目光。
                               晒一晒,好心情,再不出来晒晒太阳,小心发霉了你。
                                                        欣
                               好吧,听你的,改天出来晒晒那早已发霉了的心情。
                                                      (停顿了一下)
                                   你怎么知道我喜欢这个牌子的防晒霜?
                                                           岩
                                   广告看多了,第一时间能想到的,也就它了。某某防晒霜,
                                  防的不是太阳,而是那发霉了的心情。挺合适的嘛。就买了。
                                                           欣
                                   做广告的,还信广告,看来你还没真正入行嘛!
                                                           岩
                                   连广告都不做的产品,你信吗?
                                                        欣
                                  承诺都信不过,何况广告!
                                                        岩
                                  生活中充斥着各种各样的广告,在爱情的世界里,承诺何尝不是一
                                  种广告。
                                                        欣
                                   别那么多感慨牢骚,看来,要晒太阳的应该是你。    
外景    回家的路上     夜景
               岩把那防晒用品,送给欣之后。在回去的时候,订了一间西餐厅,时间是1月4号晚,两人。
插入特写
              2013年1月4日
外景    某十字大街    日景
               岩拿起手机,给嫣发了一条信息。
(手机屏幕上)
                                                             还记得我们的约定吗?老地方见!
另一角度
               等了许久,才收到一条回复短信。
                                                           (屏幕上显示着)
                                                                我们再也回不去了!我已经给你卡打上3万元,你可以去还人家了,忘记我吧。
                                                           (岩回复)
                                                            若不是因为爱着你,怎会不经意就叹息,在我的世界里,你依旧纯洁,脏了的只是这个世界
                                                             (岩收到)
                                                           谁还记得爱情开始变化的时候,我和你的眼中,看到了不同的天空。爱情就像乘法,其中一项为零注定结果永远是零,愿你也会找到属于你的最爱。
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              飞开着保时捷与嫣在一条一望无际的公路上飞驰着。嫣把岩送的那简陋的戒指抛到空中。
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               戒指掉在公路上。    
外景    沙滩上     夜景
               岩一个人在那坐着,望着大海。

                                                       (画外音)

                                                   年少时的爱情,就是欢天喜地地认为会与眼前人过一辈子,所以预想以后的种种,一口咬定它会实现。直到很多年后,当我们经历了成长的阵痛,爱情的变故,走过千山万水后,才会幡然醒悟,那么多年的时光只是上天赐予你的一场美梦,为了支撑你此后坚强地走完这冗长的一生,爱情最欠扁的地方就是,他爱你,不代表他不背叛你,他背叛你,也不代表他不爱你。
那些以前说着永不分离的人,早已经散落在天涯了。
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